Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1UBbmz-00048y-QG for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Mar 2013 02:03:06 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with smtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1UBbmz-0000gX-4T for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Mar 2013 02:03:05 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1UBbmy-0000gR-6e for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Mar 2013 02:03:04 +0000 Received: from mail-vc0-f176.google.com ([209.85.220.176]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1UBbmv-0001uA-6S for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Mar 2013 02:03:03 +0000 Received: by mail-vc0-f176.google.com with SMTP id fk10so2356441vcb.35 for ; Fri, 01 Mar 2013 18:02:59 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-type; bh=XqTqVFocpzUhM1Ognj65hePLk1lro7q5INvMms4GJv8=; b=H/9DLEji6i8o2jgoKn3O8EnwSXWf6adyTQEPQlpKKdHoRWXl1He8TfhTD4SNOZvPat W2BEgDSjhDvzIpwucv8B9wOOZWtQEN3zaht4gvDnUyEfan30MWnGcoRmnLD+aRUDfFJz YqtmjWNZ2Pr5XHGM07r7pXELUjnGT5PQt0xWR/bU2y7Q7pnK/UsRmuNSt1cJm5RCXU4d d/FpY2h5AfcKJlc9vgOOSXL8p0k9d4YSN7ac+uAnyr1FwSibPnY51eAGKgv7vsdvxMQS YEAnjJlgrAZw9NCoqIVRHh1TR5OGcegPQAv7KFeyiQ9SoJZUR6ZbGxY59KN+Hh1FeZsM l+Gg== X-Received: by 10.220.149.147 with SMTP id t19mr4816947vcv.36.1362189779795; Fri, 01 Mar 2013 18:02:59 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.58.85.41 with HTTP; Fri, 1 Mar 2013 18:02:39 -0800 (PST) From: Josh Kupershmidt Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2013 19:02:39 -0700 Message-ID: Subject: few awkward phrasing fixes To: pgsql-docs Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=f46d043c7fdcf13a1404d6e785fa X-Pg-Spam-Score: -2.7 (--) List-Archive: List-Help: List-ID: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Mailing-List: pgsql-docs Precedence: bulk Sender: pgsql-docs-owner@postgresql.org --f46d043c7fdcf13a1404d6e785fa Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Hi all, Attached are two small patches to fix some awkward phrasing in pg_basebackup.sgml and docguide.sgml. 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