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From: Julien Rouhaud <[email protected]>
To: Tatsuo Ishii <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected]
Subject: Re: Typo in perform.sgml?
Date: Sat, 7 Dec 2019 14:01:37 +0100
Message-ID: <CAOBaU_afRuoGf40O0YN_ncZ5L5pEXF8HaUXJ6A_S3XgOJWH5Dw@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
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On Sat, Dec 7, 2019 at 12:05 PM Tatsuo Ishii <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Around line 904 of perform.sgml
>
> "These node types have the ability to discard subnodes which they are
> able to determine won't contain any records required by the query."
>
> I was not able to parse this. Maybe "that they " is needed after
> "determine"?

Agreed.  Also, I'm not a native english speaker either, but the
"which" sounds weird too.  How about:

These node types have the ability to discard subnodes for which they
are able to determine that won't contain any records required by the
query.

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