Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1idraH-00044y-Uf for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 08:06:30 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1idraG-0008P1-H5 for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 08:06:28 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1idraG-0008Oa-1V for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 08:06:28 +0000 Received: from mail-qt1-x832.google.com ([2607:f8b0:4864:20::832]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_128_GCM_SHA256:128) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1idra9-0000n8-7W for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 08:06:26 +0000 Received: by mail-qt1-x832.google.com with SMTP id j5so12140680qtq.9 for ; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 00:06:20 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=NfF9+A98nAGWsQuGddN6cS2RRWGaVg0vEaneJXCyUiY=; b=O1+ntTq/h6bw4/ug222QrXxYMdM6Utb1CobbfgngXQ2IpYhRcJ8hCXogTXkA91K7Xx 13LGLr/bUKYD+pnTfUcp88ApYK1+SNwyVBKOa9ztBEMvEvK9iV3ofnO09XcCAqFU6/5x QrQ0j2Qco0nUIp4fSo9ROhSqxXjfyYoV1wVRVxDHJKuBQBqIDdvO8dKEX+gxR9b3/Or/ WVZ8/xWvjzY0DEdW1Xqbm/Yi2gDv9/76cQ0aaC0wb486gbgqInOoONpam/46sj/cuOyY lORiYCKGtKkm2B5FZHdAASr9DPB/y30/yPLBuLz1EiC/RtQTcHqf3jo9PjNi9GOzQ/0n 3HGQ== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=NfF9+A98nAGWsQuGddN6cS2RRWGaVg0vEaneJXCyUiY=; b=tfQ1ppDMQn995IuoIEsrvQdVwa+tqARxhnYhfSN+FtTZC63e4oNVHKvHCoNs1Lhtom uKckF7UUYWXHe+d4DXru8tHbfTVFLS3NDFeV7AkABH0lFjxNZYnFdD1Iev22By3KzPcl Ida9+hZrs1ogKrEm2nV9KInmQl/Ya3aRIOnrhpO+AKVepF8HZa3dPES/5A2af2nyTNQs IJQfaUhR/jnBIIHf7d37kGqZmOTgfVeCDXsUbIUsZHI9N8O4CqHdnUKcoFmWbPHPSrvO XQOXondGUyTmfgp5lckVCTngkYBBbXm/Dg3txq7wgqAr4ABNVjMpRrG9edEjjPdlabqZ t+Bw== X-Gm-Message-State: APjAAAWP09TS89tyX1diCM5PYb5jYkxvdE3asqtH3OtbRRbSexvcLjwT vMFnXEuBuZ8k7imjtch3ZJNPtEnrt/a/bA+yzgA= X-Google-Smtp-Source: APXvYqwyBZgzud9opZmsPbGGvhSL6wSrbk+e0yIiMser9fKTgWlHJIWP5/npGmcNiaAZOMNmeQUmugXKHoQ9W2BGQOc= X-Received: by 2002:ac8:7b9b:: with SMTP id p27mr21015327qtu.2.1575792379826; Sun, 08 Dec 2019 00:06:19 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <29011.1575737207@sss.pgh.pa.us> <14957.1575752199@sss.pgh.pa.us> <20191208.115101.1888716664784456518.t-ishii@sraoss.co.jp> In-Reply-To: <20191208.115101.1888716664784456518.t-ishii@sraoss.co.jp> From: Julien Rouhaud Date: Sun, 8 Dec 2019 09:07:53 +0100 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Typo in perform.sgml? To: Tatsuo Ishii Cc: Tom Lane , pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk On Sun, Dec 8, 2019 at 3:51 AM Tatsuo Ishii wrote: > > > I wrote: > >> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote > >> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum > >> "Omit needless words". > > > > Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with > > the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows", > > and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's > > actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it > > offers more details. > > Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than > before. I agree this is way better!