Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mLQOK-0000lk-Ca for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Wed, 01 Sep 2021 13:35:01 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mLQOJ-0002mR-CN for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Wed, 01 Sep 2021 13:34:59 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mLQOI-0002jj-49 for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Wed, 01 Sep 2021 13:34:59 +0000 Received: from out1-smtp.messagingengine.com ([66.111.4.25]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mLQOB-0006Hu-8j for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Wed, 01 Sep 2021 13:34:57 +0000 Received: from compute2.internal (compute2.nyi.internal [10.202.2.42]) by mailout.nyi.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id E2D1B5C01F6; Wed, 1 Sep 2021 09:34:48 -0400 (EDT) Received: from mailfrontend2 ([10.202.2.163]) by compute2.internal (MEProxy); Wed, 01 Sep 2021 09:34:48 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=paquier.xyz; h= date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references:mime-version :content-type:in-reply-to; s=fm2; bh=CKUiOzHI2e7VcwkcnqFbCQi5vdo UI/WDlqPr7iD+xAE=; b=pdP/BZjksN7je9ZS+FazPWuu88Ff7ZSS+zULmxWMWm6 EspLXJXFMjz1hnYE+wbizM/5a8UGswXdSlxsIObTsC+zsdvaHYhbBguMZHDuKTDx zMyIjL+orfv8MYOPxFfD8W6tH403EriAufcONjvRv7hxWwpnzzUUJgRjowzqnKqO T4JYSgJWKwABYUEkwUVnG6dja7hhwk2lEK/eMkvPPuK3Ta1PvLZexxBkIb7gdbk0 84rfY0Hpi2WgtlU95JcfZNodRVYRxjIk7eGqvySIC6NJFI1wWxtq/9KKoy6FGGLQ hV/z7AVq9jDy6g7Y5FXKlostczKX2H/c4GxAegfUFNQ== DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:content-type:date:from:in-reply-to :message-id:mime-version:references:subject:to:x-me-proxy :x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender:x-sasl-enc; s=fm3; bh=CKUiOz HI2e7VcwkcnqFbCQi5vdoUI/WDlqPr7iD+xAE=; b=kOZB0LYI5xapgqG6yGZqAg xjFKSb4Zf0R8hqsLfNAs6PbHys2HlzKggNYRwpkuO4Dt2RQhCmI2ER2BAQJzNX/8 txbwrIkV1mFJg2tsZfAnSzhYfxlEpsBjD5z/7Usko2lLMZgpiyvesbevRB0Fgk6Q k7WvmiSoYv3bUnuJfhg5HDWCcAy9n2AeeR+g1RokMDM2gbsfdviNpOs4Ppp9Uii+ hmWa9Iav84bOH+cw8kOF0tudr4PH9QWO1aVhciT1JJDr7qsbUwPFmOKGRrA5kSm6 MVa/IKMeLSLlStXF2lCN5ScGpPy3RoWO2k1wbfpuf6c0ky31ZZ0zL/wWBO+KdiMA == X-ME-Sender: X-ME-Received: X-ME-Proxy-Cause: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgedvtddruddvfedgieehucetufdoteggodetrfdotf fvucfrrhhofhhilhgvmecuhfgrshhtofgrihhlpdfqfgfvpdfurfetoffkrfgpnffqhgen uceurghilhhouhhtmecufedttdenucesvcftvggtihhpihgvnhhtshculddquddttddmne gfrhhlucfvnfffucdljedtmdenucfjughrpeffhffvuffkfhggtggujgesghdtreertddt vdenucfhrhhomhepofhitghhrggvlhcurfgrqhhuihgvrhcuoehmihgthhgrvghlsehprg hquhhivghrrdighiiiqeenucggtffrrghtthgvrhhnpedvgeduuefhtdeuleettdevjeeh heeiveeuieegleetgeeljeelieeuieehgeevhfenucevlhhushhtvghrufhiiigvpedtne curfgrrhgrmhepmhgrihhlfhhrohhmpehmihgthhgrvghlsehprghquhhivghrrdighiii X-ME-Proxy: Received: by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA; Wed, 1 Sep 2021 09:34:46 -0400 (EDT) Date: Wed, 1 Sep 2021 22:34:42 +0900 From: Michael Paquier To: Elena Indrupskaya Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org Subject: Re: Inaccurate usage of "which" instead of "that" in parallel.sgml Message-ID: References: <1c994b3d-951e-59bb-1ac2-7b9221c0e4cf@postgrespro.ru> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="+kbliFg3iM1boDx/" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1c994b3d-951e-59bb-1ac2-7b9221c0e4cf@postgrespro.ru> List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk --+kbliFg3iM1boDx/ Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Wed, Sep 01, 2021 at 01:24:18PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote: > Since the content of parallel.sgml is not new, the documentation for earlier > versions of PostgreSQL has the same inaccuracies, and it would be great to > fix them there too. The patch also applies to versions 12 and 13, except one > @@ section). Thanks Elena for caring about that. Agreed that these are improvements. -- Michael --+kbliFg3iM1boDx/ Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAEBCAAdFiEEG72nH6vTowiyblFKnvQgOdbyQH0FAmEvgXIACgkQnvQgOdby QH2YNA//VkbfSzeNFK+yBFrrGsjiO8+2hwx+sYjr/V3HoNDt8AKM1T6Ou9zrtkeb LVfR9elWub1QdsxpWeRhO73z0rTQJbd2ypYrQFJT9pYp2T5zUjlj9hehwDksZLHh u6L94Def/ByG6WZFUgwDCpw9sZyy/uhodERGJeqpq2ogeavG4x81OmxYLe3Gw9tZ E+OlDAwrKUohWD0R6H3IzHswPCy030iyADe5/d4wSxLoJXnfiIeweps/B2cmSUhf Cm4HAaNU3CdEgSin6y9SGrf1IZOJ333Kpg/NyZZP0k5EEbZ+SZU7XUUtI0IC2ax0 wVwK5ANT6mjudE4qoqvqAi1tvPO5AvBlQdubE9aR01h4HQHCetHcZ2XeOoBToU51 /AMVApJOqM509IfZ69/Wz/fb2nB8QPsLev9A4uf+qPPFXPZASk5sfbRu5xJ6f3hZ QJVo9nyLIDCiZRLJ/w74jlFcirQJLY2Rv/aQMYeWH+L7ByNb0E83sRBKheVyGlqZ oDjFKcBSsBA49REPUwZ36h3wlnso1CdLrqEYwd5OOkVz/s4mBzrrwdQijx/QdmHZ jvTcd2R47LeqJvhR6FTbsFU0cRUxLRVpZxxO+qKHs31dy6P/4sTGwg+R8IMcoAHk kjaU7Ec16wGNnMOXFEQRvwt8ypBUcGoiGO3u61lLB4i2sOSsd30= =s3zU -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --+kbliFg3iM1boDx/--