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Date: Sat, 28 Oct 2023 15:14:32 -0400
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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Subject: Re: "22.3. Template Databases" documentation is incomplete
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On Sat, Oct 28, 2023 at 02:42:06PM -0400, Tom Lane wrote:
> Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> writes:
> > Sorry, I attached a _colorized_ diff;  here is a normal one.
> 
> The new sentence is fine in isolation, but this doesn't feel like
> a great spot to put it.  The preceding several lines are all about
> copying of objects within the database, and this isn't.  In
> particular, the antecedent of "it" is unclear and is different
> from what "it" means in the immediately preceding sentence.
> 
> It might be best to split the thing out into its own para?
> Something like
> 
>     action being taken when those databases are created.
>    </para>
> 
> +  <para>
> +   However, <command>CREATE DATABASE</command> does not copy
> +   database-level <command>GRANT</command> permissions attached to the
> +   source database.  The new database has default permissions.
> +  </para>
> +
>    <para>
>     There is a second standard system database named

Sure.

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