Date: Fri, 27 Oct 2023 21:12:18 -0400
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: eric.mutta@gmail.com, pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Subject: Re: Typo in docs for "recovery_init_sync_method" parameter.
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On Tue, Aug 23, 2022 at 02:38:13PM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
> 
> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/runtime-config-error-handling.html
> Description:
> 
> The second paragraph contains the sentence:
> 
>     > ...to ask the operating system to synchronize the whole file systems
> that contain the data directory...
> 
> I believe the word "the" in "the whole file systems" should be removed so it
> reads:
> 
>     > ...to ask the operating system to synchronize whole file systems that
> contain the data directory...

I ended up with this rewording, attached, and applied to master.

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 4047eefc64..985cabfc0b 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -10554,7 +10554,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
        </para>
        <para>
         On Linux, <literal>syncfs</literal> may be used instead, to ask the
-        operating system to synchronize the whole file systems that contain the
+        operating system to synchronize the file systems that contain the
         data directory, the WAL files and each tablespace (but not any other
         file systems that may be reachable through symbolic links).  See
         <xref linkend="syncfs"/> for more information about using

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