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From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
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Subject: Re: "22.3. Template Databases" documentation is incomplete
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On Sat, Oct 28, 2023 at 03:14:32PM -0400, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> On Sat, Oct 28, 2023 at 02:42:06PM -0400, Tom Lane wrote:
> > Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> writes:
> > > Sorry, I attached a _colorized_ diff;  here is a normal one.
> > 
> > The new sentence is fine in isolation, but this doesn't feel like
> > a great spot to put it.  The preceding several lines are all about
> > copying of objects within the database, and this isn't.  In
> > particular, the antecedent of "it" is unclear and is different
> > from what "it" means in the immediately preceding sentence.
> > 
> > It might be best to split the thing out into its own para?
> > Something like
> > 
> >     action being taken when those databases are created.
> >    </para>
> > 
> > +  <para>
> > +   However, <command>CREATE DATABASE</command> does not copy
> > +   database-level <command>GRANT</command> permissions attached to the
> > +   source database.  The new database has default permissions.
> > +  </para>
> > +
> >    <para>
> >     There is a second standard system database named
> 
> Sure.

Separate paragraph version applied to all supported versions.

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