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On Fri, Nov  1, 2024 at 09:07:38AM +1100, Peter Smith wrote:
> On Fri, Nov 1, 2024 at 2:16 AM Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> wrote:
> >
> > On Fri, Oct 25, 2024 at 11:48:16PM +0200, Koen De Groote wrote:
> > > Number 2 would be perfect, I think. It leaves no doubt at all.
> >
> > I went with even more direct wording, patch attached.  Glad we could
> > improve this together --- the feedback from everyone was helpful.
> >
> 
> One small nit -- I think "PostgreSQL" typically would have SGML markup:
> 
> <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>

Yes, I thought so too, but if you look at the SGML, it uses PostgreSQL
with no markup in many places close to this sentence, e.g. "PostgreSQL
supports both  mechanisms concurrently".

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