Message-ID: <a56ef4f6141520d3a7e3763daa308d7373b97081.camel@cybertec.at>
Subject: Re: standalone-install.xml
From: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
To: Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp>, pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2019 08:19:38 +0100
In-Reply-To: <20191121.090858.1208231771390828756.t-ishii@sraoss.co.jp>
References: <20191121.090858.1208231771390828756.t-ishii@sraoss.co.jp>
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On Thu, 2019-11-21 at 09:08 +0900, Tatsuo Ishii wrote:
> I just want to make sure that if I understand correctly what $subject says. In the file:
> 
>      The previous <command>initdb</command> step should have told you how to
>      start up the database server. Do so now. The command should look
>      something like:
> 
> I think "previous <command>initdb</command> step" means the actual
> execution of initdb command, rather than it refers to the description
> about initdb in the previous section of the doc.
> 
> In another word, "previous step should have told you how to start up
> the database server" referes to the message from initdb:
> 
> Success. You can now start the database server using:
> 
>     pg_ctl -D data -l logfile start
> 
> Am I correct?

Right.

Maybe it were better to write:

  The output from the previous <command>initdb</command> step should have told you

Yours,
Laurenz Albe