Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1sxjVw-00C0gj-KS for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 07 Oct 2024 08:54:49 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1sxjVu-008Lg6-6e for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 07 Oct 2024 08:54:46 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1sxjVt-008Lff-QW for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Mon, 07 Oct 2024 08:54:45 +0000 Received: from mail.postgrespro.ru ([93.174.131.139]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1sxjVq-002zsN-Pq for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Mon, 07 Oct 2024 08:54:44 +0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=postgrespro.ru; s=mx2023; t=1728291280; bh=slNDanF9gGrkhegWUOD3QHtkesMkHPQtHKdtZIw/hMo=; h=Message-ID:Date:User-Agent:Subject:To:Cc:References:From: In-Reply-To:From; b=dVqljdedS8aWoz2rbE//DqqVUcKqR4FTJqt3PDF9+rt4EKOabbUVZLflK0QzzZGh0 Kk3Dy0g6oR1z7+NdPaNbJFzkg6asJSUUvHjUlaQfVat6aA1Y68VNvnnK8NQpZVVOck YEZ8fbXxzrXZ8wg9omUrGyjtAvSY25pZ7L18Nl8qkssm8aTcafoPGk97IlTDUR+enP i7SUjmfLEUTIQBkVBLk3KFH30pqhTlUmoNKvIooNPQg1WLiK74O1MIIaeuwIb7z33I xcBdmSoI8DfMJu72+ift/h/H1vMT3Cg7xBThnIFCi//D395/3pOKW3H5ZXbDXA1tC7 dHVl4ULWf4Xvg== Received: from [10.4.14.56] (unknown [93.174.131.141]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 (128/128 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) (Authenticated sender: o.sibiryakov@postgrespro.ru) by mail.postgrespro.ru (Postfix/587) with ESMTPSA id 8E50F60274; Mon, 7 Oct 2024 11:54:40 +0300 (MSK) Message-ID: Date: Mon, 7 Oct 2024 11:54:40 +0300 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: Documentation improvement patch To: Daniel Gustafsson Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org References: <2a9455d8-2938-4346-93bc-2eb02b6261e0@postgrespro.ru> <3233C0FF-2EED-4A57-8FFF-ACAEDAE2706C@yesql.se> <8718aeb8-4ecf-4090-a153-cc60760c307d@postgrespro.ru> <1F1D8E04-3A0A-4906-BC7C-3E194950DE1D@yesql.se> <3f595f00-9fbe-4062-b450-34bcf5c11ce0@postgrespro.ru> <1F9CE94B-5EB5-4706-BD19-4D97E45991DA@yesql.se> Content-Language: en-US From: Oleg Sibiryakov In-Reply-To: <1F9CE94B-5EB5-4706-BD19-4D97E45991DA@yesql.se> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-KSMG-AntiPhishing: NotDetected X-KSMG-AntiSpam-Interceptor-Info: not scanned X-KSMG-AntiSpam-Status: not scanned, disabled by settings X-KSMG-AntiVirus: Kaspersky Secure Mail Gateway, version 2.1.0.7854, bases: 2024/10/07 08:05:00 #26713075 X-KSMG-AntiVirus-Status: NotDetected, skipped X-KSMG-LinksScanning: not scanned, disabled by settings X-KSMG-Message-Action: skipped X-KSMG-Rule-ID: 1 List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk Thank you, Daniel. -- Oleg Sibiryakov On 02.10.2024 15:58, Daniel Gustafsson wrote: >> On 2 Oct 2024, at 10:09, Oleg Sibiryakov wrote: >> >> Thank you for your kind feedback! I will take due note of the comments in the next documentation patches as well. >> >> I have made all the changes as per your feedback and also corrected paragraph reflow. >> >> The third version of the patch is attached for your consideration. > Thanks, I have gone over and applied most of these changes. I did leave out a > few (like the libc one) where the current page had multiple different versions. > > -- > Daniel Gustafsson > > >