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Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2011 23:04:06 +0100
Subject: small mvcc.sqml improvents
From: "Erik Rijkers" <er@xs4all.nl>
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Here are two small changes to mvcc.sgml:

1. typo ('are' for 'at')

2. Change title of Table 13.1 to say 'Standard SQL' instead of just 'SQL', to make immediately
clear that the table does /not/ show the levels in postgresql, but the levels as described in the
SQL standard.  (the postgres levels are described in the text below the table)


Thanks,


Erik Rijkers
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--- doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml.orig	2011-12-16 22:35:27.000000000 +0100
+++ doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml	2011-12-16 22:38:37.000000000 +0100
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    The phenomena which are prohibited are various levels are:
+    The phenomena which are prohibited at various levels are:
 
     <variablelist>
      <varlistentry>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
    </para>
 
     <table tocentry="1" id="mvcc-isolevel-table">
-     <title><acronym>SQL</acronym> Transaction Isolation Levels</title>
+     <title>Standard <acronym>SQL</acronym> Transaction Isolation Levels</title>
      <tgroup cols="4">
       <thead>
        <row>
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