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Date: Sat, 13 Oct 2018 15:38:40 -0500
From: Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>
To: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
Cc: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>, pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org,
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Subject: Re: fine tune v11 release notes
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On Sat, Oct 13, 2018 at 04:34:07PM -0400, Tom Lane wrote:
> "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org> writes:
> > On 10/6/18 9:42 AM, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> >> Find below various fixes to release notes for v11, for discussion purposes.
> 
> > Thanks for putting this together. I reviewed, broke it up into two
> > patches, and made some additions / changes / deletions. Please see
> > attached patches.
> 
> Hmm, I just saw this after spending an afternoon editing the release
> notes.  I'll try to merge it with what I did.

I had some more local changes too...I'll try to send an patch relative to my
original.  I'm sure Jonathan already caught most of the errors anyway.

Justin