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Date: Mon, 3 Aug 2020 17:02:14 -0400
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
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On Mon, Aug  3, 2020 at 11:35:50AM -0700, Peter Geoghegan wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 30, 2020 at 10:45 AM Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie> wrote:
> > On Thu, Jul 30, 2020 at 10:32 AM Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> wrote:
> > > I came up with a more verbose documentation suggestion, attached.
> >
> > I'm okay with this.
> 
> Are you going to push this soon, Bruce?

Done.

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