Date: Thu, 10 Sep 2020 17:27:05 -0500
From: Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>
To: Peter Eisentraut <peter.eisentraut@2ndquadrant.com>,
	Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
Cc: Amit Kapila <amit.kapila16@gmail.com>, Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>,
	pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org
Subject: Re: PG 13 release notes, first draft
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On Mon, Sep 07, 2020 at 08:40:26AM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:

Rebasing onto 3965de54e718600a4703233936e56a3202caf73f, I'm left with:

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
index 8fffc6fe0a..69d143e10c 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
      </para>
 
 <programlisting>
-SELECT round(sum(<replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable> / n::float)) FROM generate_series(1, <replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable>) s(n);
+SELECT round(sum(<replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable> / n::float)) AS newvalue FROM generate_series(1, <replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable>) s(n);
 </programlisting>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -776,8 +776,8 @@ Author: Noah Misch <noah@leadboat.com>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Allow skipping of <acronym>WAL</acronym> for <link
-        linkend="guc-full-page-writes">full table writes</link> if <xref
+        Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> writes to be skipped during a transaction
+        which creates or rewrites a relation if <xref
         linkend="guc-wal-level"/> is <literal>minimal</literal> (Kyotaro
         Horiguchi)
        </para>
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 
        <para>
         Add <structfield>leader_pid</structfield> to <xref
-        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker ownership
+        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker's leader process
         (Julien Rouhaud)
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1262,8 +1262,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Enable <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
-        support on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
+        Enable support for <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
+        on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1391,8 +1391,8 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> recovery to continue even if invalid
-       pages are referenced (Fujii Masao)
+       Allow recovery to continue even if invalid
+       pages are referenced by <acronym>WAL</acronym> (Fujii Masao)
       </para>
 
       <para>