Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1kJh7l-0001t9-48 for pgsql-hackers@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 17:58:13 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1kJh7j-0007zn-VJ for pgsql-hackers@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 17:58:11 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1kJh7j-0007zg-FJ for pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 17:58:11 +0000 Received: from mail-io1-xd33.google.com ([2607:f8b0:4864:20::d33]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_128_GCM_SHA256:128) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1kJh7f-0003Wc-Jl for pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 17:58:10 +0000 Received: by mail-io1-xd33.google.com with SMTP id y74so10698111iof.12 for ; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 10:58:07 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=telsasoft-com.20150623.gappssmtp.com; s=20150623; h=date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references:mime-version :content-disposition:in-reply-to:user-agent; bh=Tk6phvpz3nSwBNykTzviEa+zfTqUvuORBekuL7SWHQc=; b=jY9azv+THN0RR69lwyZVqAao9iON6+L95lWMrp2zfFRnGBmkB6rMBfa9DIEKaRl7K4 inW5rz8u8fdUnS3pCmJWyU9cn2f33QGe4VUhBvej5e6ozy48LbNFWdAifnQ1VMTCIS08 GQabiB8L4XHlzsnuEPwTgQyFwbv0iuIQSyphNr3+an0V/gORnX7c/mYSKRyC96glV6Lo pCaM2WYb+gJgVMBsN3AMBT2o9TJqUqMXM19U4Uy3ZzgQIpUIlLXdcpWOiwwmDCHdwxZT nA6t85GMo+EjRpHIxyDC1HjXZt336LMtiKOuDiOw6KQgEc1H6oTri/Qh/99h2gFcVr4D CQeQ== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references :mime-version:content-disposition:in-reply-to:user-agent; bh=Tk6phvpz3nSwBNykTzviEa+zfTqUvuORBekuL7SWHQc=; b=EsMAncatVyDRLfgNfeZT9X5NW9royc2LPrUpEHElwT9+appmMesUnJMdIaNMhWd+n9 U5xKcM6uaeka0MGtYAvmgVbZR8Zzxz+2AHVCJ+Q9KC07gCFTCCVVUEzL2WZXBlez4MYv xE3hz1QX4+YkNl++h1pQj8UNKvDz0ngtDIZ2n0gdu2/mFpEdmfeEUu0jJtWeeU+RAxCK F/20S4qNI+n7+IXUtQYHowrBQ/r/LKvK/g5fl7Wm6XwkkBtxQs3QsmPntjV9PNpqfuyd 6B8BjhJ4aCgNrlwfiSJvYERyBwdtb39S5s9zbCUn7ZUZ0aQBrThs2ltUyA5It4AEI5hj xaUQ== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM532GYo4W6jygalDgYSQ6xENYvZKa1yNO8vIwy5kSBHc+rXIBYs5+ j1Iv5OTrPxn+1G6AU874gGSU+g== X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJzZfZk6LgZsbUpaOBnqzfaAR18rpEwJsQ5z7BO01ndvBTRJsdHZYRsxXklEXwFoXpiT9uKEnQ== X-Received: by 2002:a6b:680f:: with SMTP id d15mr31594344ioc.198.1600538286862; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 10:58:06 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pryzbyj.telsasoft (charmander.telsasoft.com. [50.244.222.1]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id e22sm3286946ioc.43.2020.09.19.10.58.05 (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-ECDSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Sat, 19 Sep 2020 10:58:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: by pryzbyj.telsasoft (Postfix, from userid 1000) id A2239800D7F; Sat, 19 Sep 2020 12:58:04 -0500 (CDT) Date: Sat, 19 Sep 2020 12:58:04 -0500 From: Justin Pryzby To: Michael Paquier Cc: pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org Subject: Re: doc review for v13 Message-ID: <20200919175804.GE30557@telsasoft.com> References: <20200612023709.GC14879@telsasoft.com> <20200612121302.GI3362@paquier.xyz> <20200615122039.GK52676@paquier.xyz> <20200615124651.GA19891@telsasoft.com> <20200818171702.GK17022@telsasoft.com> <20200831072820.GC6555@paquier.xyz> <20200831134208.GI5450@telsasoft.com> <20200901031254.GF3511@paquier.xyz> <20200909143742.GE18552@telsasoft.com> <20200910065831.GE2743@paquier.xyz> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="L6iaP+gRLNZHKoI4" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20200910065831.GE2743@paquier.xyz> User-Agent: Mutt/1.9.4 (2018-02-28) List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk --L6iaP+gRLNZHKoI4 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Thu, Sep 10, 2020 at 03:58:31PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote: > On Wed, Sep 09, 2020 at 09:37:42AM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote: > > I've added a few more. > > I have done an extra round of review on this patch series, and applied > what looked obvious to me (basically the points already discussed > upthread). Some parts applied down to 9.6 for the docs. Thanks. Here's the remainder, with some new ones. -- Justin --L6iaP+gRLNZHKoI4 Content-Type: text/x-diff; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="v9-0001-doc-btree-deduplication.patch"