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Date: Sun, 6 Feb 2022 10:44:23 -0800
From: Andres Freund <andres@anarazel.de>
To: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
Cc: pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org,
	Michael Banck <michael.banck@credativ.de>
Subject: Re: Release notes for February minor releases
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Hi,

On 2022-02-06 13:09:41 -0500, Tom Lane wrote:
> Andres Freund <andres@anarazel.de> writes:
> > That's obviously to complicated for the release notes. Trying to make it more
> > understandable I came up with the following, which still does not seem great:
> > ...
> 
> How do you like this wording?

> I'm also going to swap the order of this item and the TOAST locking
> item, since that one is seeming like it's much more relevant to
> most people.

+1

Thanks!