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* [PATCH 16/18] doc review for logical decoding of prepared xacts
@ 2021-01-24 03:03  Justin Pryzby <[email protected]>
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From: Justin Pryzby @ 2021-01-24 03:03 UTC (permalink / raw)

0aa8a01d04c8fe200b7a106878eebc3d0af9105c
---
 doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml
index b854f2ccfc..71e9f36b8e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml
@@ -791,9 +791,9 @@ typedef void (*LogicalDecodeMessageCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx,
      <para>
        The optional <function>filter_prepare_cb</function> callback
        is called to determine whether data that is part of the current
-       two-phase commit transaction should be considered for decode
-       at this prepare stage or as a regular one-phase transaction at
-       <command>COMMIT PREPARED</command> time later. To signal that
+       two-phase commit transaction should be considered for decoding
+       at this prepare stage or later as a regular one-phase transaction at
+       <command>COMMIT PREPARED</command> time. To signal that
        decoding should be skipped, return <literal>true</literal>;
        <literal>false</literal> otherwise. When the callback is not
        defined, <literal>false</literal> is assumed (i.e. nothing is
@@ -820,11 +820,11 @@ typedef bool (*LogicalDecodeFilterPrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx
       The required <function>begin_prepare_cb</function> callback is called
       whenever the start of a prepared transaction has been decoded. The
       <parameter>gid</parameter> field, which is part of the
-      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter can be used in this callback to
-      check if the plugin has already received this prepare in which case it
+      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter, can be used in this callback to
+      check if the plugin has already received this PREPARE in which case it
       can skip the remaining changes of the transaction. This can only happen
-      if the user restarts the decoding after receiving the prepare for a
-      transaction but before receiving the commit prepared say because of some
+      if the user restarts the decoding after receiving the PREPARE for a
+      transaction but before receiving the COMMIT PREPARED, say because of some
       error.
       <programlisting>
        typedef void (*LogicalDecodeBeginPrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx,
@@ -842,7 +842,7 @@ typedef bool (*LogicalDecodeFilterPrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx
       decoded. The <function>change_cb</function> callback for all modified
       rows will have been called before this, if there have been any modified
       rows. The <parameter>gid</parameter> field, which is part of the
-      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter can be used in this callback.
+      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter, can be used in this callback.
       <programlisting>
        typedef void (*LogicalDecodePrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx,
                                                ReorderBufferTXN *txn,
@@ -856,9 +856,9 @@ typedef bool (*LogicalDecodeFilterPrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx
 
      <para>
       The required <function>commit_prepared_cb</function> callback is called
-      whenever a transaction commit prepared has been decoded. The
+      whenever a transaction COMMIT PREPARED has been decoded. The
       <parameter>gid</parameter> field, which is part of the
-      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter can be used in this callback.
+      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter, can be used in this callback.
       <programlisting>
        typedef void (*LogicalDecodeCommitPreparedCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx,
                                                       ReorderBufferTXN *txn,
@@ -872,15 +872,15 @@ typedef bool (*LogicalDecodeFilterPrepareCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx
 
      <para>
       The required <function>rollback_prepared_cb</function> callback is called
-      whenever a transaction rollback prepared has been decoded. The
+      whenever a transaction ROLLBACK PREPARED has been decoded. The
       <parameter>gid</parameter> field, which is part of the
-      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter can be used in this callback. The
+      <parameter>txn</parameter> parameter, can be used in this callback. The
       parameters <parameter>prepare_end_lsn</parameter> and
       <parameter>prepare_time</parameter> can be used to check if the plugin
-      has received this prepare transaction in which case it can apply the
+      has received this PREPARE TRANSACTION in which case it can apply the
       rollback, otherwise, it can skip the rollback operation. The
       <parameter>gid</parameter> alone is not sufficient because the downstream
-      node can have prepared transaction with same identifier.
+      node can have a prepared transaction with same identifier.
       <programlisting>
        typedef void (*LogicalDecodeRollbackPreparedCB) (struct LogicalDecodingContext *ctx,
                                                         ReorderBufferTXN *txn,
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ OutputPluginWrite(ctx, true);
     the <function>stream_commit_cb</function> callback
     (or possibly aborted using the <function>stream_abort_cb</function> callback).
     If two-phase commits are supported, the transaction can be prepared using the
-    <function>stream_prepare_cb</function> callback, commit prepared using the
+    <function>stream_prepare_cb</function> callback, COMMIT PREPARED using the
     <function>commit_prepared_cb</function> callback or aborted using the
     <function>rollback_prepared_cb</function>.
    </para>
-- 
2.17.0


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* Typos in reorderbuffer.c.
@ 2024-03-14 04:28  Kyotaro Horiguchi <[email protected]>
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From: Kyotaro Horiguchi @ 2024-03-14 04:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pgsql-hackers

Hello.

While examining reorderbuffer.c, I found several typos. I'm not sure
if fixing them is worthwhile, but I've attached a fix just in case.

regards.

-- 
Kyotaro Horiguchi
NTT Open Source Software Center


Attachments:

  [text/x-patch] fix_reorderbuffer_c_typos.patch (3.4K, ../../[email protected]/2-fix_reorderbuffer_c_typos.patch)
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diff --git a/src/backend/replication/logical/reorderbuffer.c b/src/backend/replication/logical/reorderbuffer.c
index 001f901ee6..92cf39ff74 100644
--- a/src/backend/replication/logical/reorderbuffer.c
+++ b/src/backend/replication/logical/reorderbuffer.c
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
  *
  *	  In order to cope with large transactions - which can be several times as
  *	  big as the available memory - this module supports spooling the contents
- *	  of a large transactions to disk. When the transaction is replayed the
+ *	  of large transactions to disk. When the transaction is replayed the
  *	  contents of individual (sub-)transactions will be read from disk in
  *	  chunks.
  *
@@ -3078,10 +3078,10 @@ ReorderBufferImmediateInvalidation(ReorderBuffer *rb, uint32 ninvalidations,
  * least once for every xid in XLogRecord->xl_xid (other places in records
  * may, but do not have to be passed through here).
  *
- * Reorderbuffer keeps some datastructures about transactions in LSN order,
+ * Reorderbuffer keeps some data structures about transactions in LSN order,
  * for efficiency. To do that it has to know about when transactions are seen
  * first in the WAL. As many types of records are not actually interesting for
- * logical decoding, they do not necessarily pass though here.
+ * logical decoding, they do not necessarily pass through here.
  */
 void
 ReorderBufferProcessXid(ReorderBuffer *rb, TransactionId xid, XLogRecPtr lsn)
@@ -3513,11 +3513,11 @@ ReorderBufferLargestTXN(ReorderBuffer *rb)
  * snapshot because we don't decode such transactions.  Also, we do not select
  * the transaction which doesn't have any streamable change.
  *
- * Note that, we skip transactions that contains incomplete changes. There
+ * Note that, we skip transactions that contain incomplete changes. There
  * is a scope of optimization here such that we can select the largest
  * transaction which has incomplete changes.  But that will make the code and
  * design quite complex and that might not be worth the benefit.  If we plan to
- * stream the transactions that contains incomplete changes then we need to
+ * stream the transactions that contain incomplete changes then we need to
  * find a way to partially stream/truncate the transaction changes in-memory
  * and build a mechanism to partially truncate the spilled files.
  * Additionally, whenever we partially stream the transaction we need to
@@ -4701,8 +4701,8 @@ ReorderBufferToastAppendChunk(ReorderBuffer *rb, ReorderBufferTXN *txn,
 }
 
 /*
- * Rejigger change->newtuple to point to in-memory toast tuples instead to
- * on-disk toast tuples that may not longer exist (think DROP TABLE or VACUUM).
+ * Rejigger change->newtuple to point to in-memory toast tuples instead of
+ * on-disk toast tuples that may no longer exist (think DROP TABLE or VACUUM).
  *
  * We cannot replace unchanged toast tuples though, so those will still point
  * to on-disk toast data.
@@ -4713,7 +4713,7 @@ ReorderBufferToastAppendChunk(ReorderBuffer *rb, ReorderBufferTXN *txn,
  * at unexpected times.
  *
  * We simply subtract size of the change before rejiggering the tuple, and
- * then adding the new size. This makes it look like the change was removed
+ * then add the new size. This makes it look like the change was removed
  * and then added back, except it only tweaks the accounting info.
  *
  * In particular it can't trigger serialization, which would be pointless


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