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Date: Tue, 14 May 2024 13:34:56 +0300
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Subject: Re: First draft of PG 17 release notes
To: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>,
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From: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
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Hi everybody,


Being a technical writer, I attached a small patch that fixes minor 
language stuff.

Thank you.


Elena Indrupskaya

Postgres Professional Company

Moscow, Russia


On 09.05.2024 07:03, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> I have committed the first draft of the PG 17 release notes;  you can
> see the results here:
>
> 	https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-17.html
>
> It will be improved until the final release.  The item count is 188,
> which is similar to recent releases:
>
> 	release-10:  189
> 	release-11:  170
> 	release-12:  180
> 	release-13:  178
> 	release-14:  220
> 	release-15:  184
> 	release-16:  206
> 	release-17:  188
>
> I welcome feedback.  For some reason it was an easier job than usual.
>
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