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From: Daniel Gustafsson <[email protected]>
To: Junwang Zhao <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL Hackers <[email protected]>
Cc: Robert Haas <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [dsm] comment typo
Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2023 10:28:00 +0200
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> On 21 Aug 2023, at 12:15, Junwang Zhao <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> On Mon, Aug 21, 2023 at 5:16 PM Daniel Gustafsson <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>>> On 18 Aug 2023, at 11:10, Junwang Zhao <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> In the following sentence, I believe either 'the' or 'a' should be kept, not
>>> both. I here keep the 'the', but feel free to change.
>> 
>>> * handle: The handle of an existing object, or for DSM_OP_CREATE, the
>>> - *    a new handle the caller wants created.
>>> + *    new handle the caller wants created.
>> 
>> Since the handle doesn't exist for DSM_OP_CREATE, both "a handle" and "the
>> handle" seems a tad misleading, how about "the identifier for the new handle the
>> caller wants created"?
>> 
> 
> Sounds great

Done that way, thanks!

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Daniel Gustafsson







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