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在 2026/4/13 13:20, Hayato Kuroda (Fujitsu) 写道:
> Dear Andres, Fujii-san,
>
> Thanks for reviewing. Updated accordingly.
>
> Best regards,
> Hayato Kuroda
> FUJITSU LIMITED
>
+1 to fix the doc.

I just feel the new sentence could be further polished a little bit, like:

If the file does not exist, it is created. By default, the log file is not accessible to other users, though members of the same group may be able to read it depending on the data directory permissions.

Regard,
Xiaopeng Wang