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From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com> writes:
> Thanks.  Here's the remainder, with some new ones.

LGTM.  I tweaked one or two places a bit more, and pushed it.

			regards, tom lane