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From: Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2026 10:42:36 +1000
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Subject: Re: DOCS - typos and grammar issues across logical replication docs.
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On Mon, Apr 27, 2026 at 5:18=E2=80=AFPM Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xy=
z> wrote:
>
> On Fri, Apr 24, 2026 at 03:32:24PM +1000, Peter Smith wrote:
> > I fed the logical replication online documentation into my favourite
> > AI tool to help me come up with the following patch that fixes many
> > minor issues (e.g., spelling, grammar, inconsistencies, vagueness,
> > etc.).
>
> It is a mixed bag of changes.  Some of the suggestions are correct
> grammar fixes, some make things somewhat worse, some are irrelevant
> (like the s/won't/will not/ or the s/please//).
>
> -  When logical replication of a table typically starts, PostgreSQL takes
> -  a snapshot of the table's data on the publisher database and copies it
> +  Logical replication of a table typically starts by PostgreSQL taking
> +  a snapshot of the table's data on the publisher database and copying i=
t
>    to the subscriber.  Once complete, changes on the publisher since the
>
> This new sentence makes less sense here.  And there's nothing bad with
> the original.
>
> Some of these mistakes are older than HEAD, and are user-visible, so
> backpatched the most relevant ones.
>
> Thanks.

Hi Michael,

Thanks for pushing!

(My opinion differs about some of the rejected ones, but I am not
going to debate about them.)

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Kind Regards
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia