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From: Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
To: Erik Rijkers <[email protected]>
Cc: John Naylor <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL-development <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PG 16 draft release notes ready
Date: Wed, 24 May 2023 12:17:51 -0400
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On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 04:57:59PM +0200, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> Op 5/24/23 om 15:58 schreef Bruce Momjian:
> > On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 12:23:02PM +0700, John Naylor wrote:
> > > 
> > > On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 11:19 AM Bruce Momjian <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Typos:
> 
> 'from standbys servers'  should be
> 'from standby servers'
> 
> 'reindexedb'  should be
> 'reindexdb'
>   (2x: the next line mentions, erroneously,  'reindexedb --system')
> 
> 'created only created'  should be
> 'only created'
>   (I think)
> 
> 'could could'  should be
> 'could'
> 
> 'are now require the role'  should be
> 'now require the role'
> 
> 'values is'  should be
> 'value is'
> 
> 'to marked'  should be
> 'to be marked'

All good, patch attached and applied.  Updated docs are at:

	https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-16.html

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  [text/x-diff] master.diff (2.8K, ../ZG44r1KgCD%2FI%[email protected]/2-master.diff)
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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
index bb92fe5cf9..88d6514ad7 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
      <para>
-      Allow logical replication from standbys servers
+      Allow logical replication from standby servers
      </para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -126,11 +126,11 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <[email protected]>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexedb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
+Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexdb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexedb --system.
+Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexdb --system.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ Create subscription statistics entries at subscription creation time so stats_re
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously entries were created only created when the first statistics were reported.
+Previously entries were created only when the first statistics were reported.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ Simplify permissions for LOCK TABLE (Jeff Davis)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions.  For example, UPDATE could could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
+Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions.  For example, UPDATE could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
 required SELECT permissions.  Now UPDATE can issue all lock levels.  MORE?
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ Restrict the privileges of CREATEROLE roles (Robert Haas)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role.  Such changes, including adding members, are now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
+Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role.  Such changes, including adding members, now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
 permission.
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ Add dependency tracking of grantors for GRANT records (Robert Haas)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-This will guarantee that pg_auth_members.grantor values is always valid.
+This guarantees that pg_auth_members.grantor values are always valid.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -3017,7 +3017,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <[email protected]>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Allow required extensions to marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
+Allow required extensions to be marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
 </para>
 
 <para>

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