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From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
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On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 01:34:56PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Being a technical writer, I attached a small patch that fixes minor language
> stuff.

You are absolutely correct.  Patch applied, thanks.

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