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Subject: [PATCH v4 05/12] Improve sentences in overview of system configuration parameters
Date: Mon, 25 Sep 2023 15:32:23 -0500
Get rid of "we" wording. Remove extra words in sentences.
Line break after end of each sentence to ease future patch reading.
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doc/src/sgml/config.sgml | 7 ++++---
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 6bc1b215db..97f9838bfb 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -10,9 +10,10 @@
<para>
There are many configuration parameters that affect the behavior of
- the database system. In the first section of this chapter we
- describe how to interact with configuration parameters. The subsequent sections
- discuss each parameter in detail.
+ the database system.
+ The first section of this chapter describes how to interact with
+ configuration parameters.
+ Subsequent sections discuss each parameter in detail.
</para>
<sect1 id="config-setting">
--
2.30.2
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