Subject: [PATCH v2 04/12] doc: pg_stat_progress_basebackup

From: Justin Pryzby <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 29 Mar 2020 21:22:43 -0500

commit e65497df8f85ab9b9084c928ff69f384ea729b24
Author: Fujii Masao <[email-masked]>
---
 doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
index c50b72137f..3ad1fd7005 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
@@ -4483,7 +4483,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
    is taking a base backup, the
    <structname>pg_stat_progress_basebackup</structname>
    view will contain a row for each WAL sender process that is currently
-   running <command>BASE_BACKUP</command> replication command
+   running the <command>BASE_BACKUP</command> replication command
    and streaming the backup. The tables below describe the information
    that will be reported and provide information about how to interpret it.
   </para>
@@ -4577,8 +4577,8 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
       <entry><literal>waiting for checkpoint to finish</literal></entry>
       <entry>
        The WAL sender process is currently performing
-       <function>pg_start_backup</function> to set up for
-       taking a base backup, and waiting for backup start
+       <function>pg_start_backup</function> to prepare to
+       take a base backup, and waiting for the start-of-backup
        checkpoint to finish.
       </entry>
      </row>
-- 
2.17.0

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