Subject: [PATCH v6 08/10] doc: backup manifests

From: Justin Pryzby <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 3 Apr 2020 16:17:28 -0500

commit 0d8c9c1210c44b36ec2efcb223a1dfbe897a3661
Author: Robert Haas <[email-masked]>

Previously reported here:
https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/20200403212445.GB12283%40telsasoft.com
---
 doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml            | 4 ++--
 doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml   | 4 ++--
 doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_verifybackup.sgml | 6 +++---
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index 8b00235a51..c402b97903 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -2586,7 +2586,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
           and sent along with the backup.  The manifest is a list of every
           file present in the backup with the exception of any WAL files that
           may be included. It also stores the size, last modification time, and
-          an optional checksum for each file.
+          optionally a checksum for each file.
           A value of <literal>force-encode</literal> forces all filenames
           to be hex-encoded; otherwise, this type of encoding is performed only
           for files whose names are non-UTF8 octet sequences.
@@ -2602,7 +2602,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
         <term><literal>MANIFEST_CHECKSUMS</literal> <replaceable>checksum_algorithm</replaceable></term>
         <listitem>
          <para>
-          Specifies the algorithm that should be applied to each file included
+          Specifies the checksum algorithm that should be applied to each file included
           in the backup manifest. Currently, the available
           algorithms are <literal>NONE</literal>, <literal>CRC32C</literal>,
           <literal>SHA224</literal>, <literal>SHA256</literal>,
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
index aa0b27c9f3..024adcb0b5 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
         not contain any checksums. Otherwise, it will contain a checksum
         of each file in the backup using the specified algorithm. In addition,
         the manifest will always contain a <literal>SHA256</literal>
-        checksum of its own contents. The <literal>SHA</literal> algorithms
+        checksum of its own content. The <literal>SHA</literal> algorithms
         are significantly more CPU-intensive than <literal>CRC32C</literal>,
         so selecting one of them may increase the time required to complete
         the backup.
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
         of each file for users who wish to verify that the backup has not been
         tampered with, while the CRC32C algorithm provides a checksum that is
         much faster to calculate; it is good at catching errors due to accidental
-        changes but is not resistant to targeted modifications.  Note that, to
+        changes but is not resistant to malicious modifications.  Note that, to
         be useful against an adversary who has access to the backup, the backup
         manifest would need to be stored securely elsewhere or otherwise
         verified not to have been modified since the backup was taken.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_verifybackup.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_verifybackup.sgml
index c160992e6d..b12e134a44 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_verifybackup.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_verifybackup.sgml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
    every check which will be performed by a running server when attempting
    to make use of the backup. Even if you use this tool, you should still
    perform test restores and verify that the resulting databases work as
-   expected and that they appear to contain the correct data. However,
+   expected and that they contain the correct data. However,
    <application>pg_verifybackup</application> can detect many problems
    that commonly occur due to storage problems or user error.
   </para>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
    for any files for which the computed checksum does not match the
    checksum stored in the manifest. This step is not performed for any files
    which produced errors in the previous step, since they are already known
-   to have problems. Also, files which were ignored in the previous step are
+   to have problems. Files which were ignored in the previous step are
    also ignored in this step.
   </para>
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
   <title>Options</title>
 
    <para>
-    The following command-line options control the behavior.
+    The following command-line options control the behavior of this program.
 
     <variablelist>
      <varlistentry>
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