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Subject: [PATCH v1 4/8] Add comma for readability
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2019 19:37:35 -0500
---
doc/src/sgml/bki.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/config.sgml | 4 ++--
doc/src/sgml/indices.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/ref/pgupgrade.sgml | 4 ++--
doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml | 4 ++--
9 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/bki.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/bki.sgml
index aa3d6f8..e27fa76 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/bki.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/bki.sgml
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@
8000—9999. This minimizes the risk of OID collisions with other
patches being developed concurrently. To keep the 8000—9999
range free for development purposes, after a patch has been committed
- to the master git repository its OIDs should be renumbered into
+ to the master git repository, its OIDs should be renumbered into
available space below that range. Typically, this will be done
near the end of each development cycle, moving all OIDs consumed by
patches committed in that cycle at the same time. The script
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 5f6873d..72f03c0 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -3433,7 +3433,7 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"' # Windows
reached. The default is <literal>pause</literal>, which means recovery will
be paused. <literal>promote</literal> means the recovery process will finish
and the server will start to accept connections.
- Finally <literal>shutdown</literal> will stop the server after reaching the
+ Finally, <literal>shutdown</literal> will stop the server after reaching the
recovery target.
</para>
<para>
@@ -4128,7 +4128,7 @@ ANY <replaceable class="parameter">num_sync</replaceable> ( <replaceable class="
</para>
<para>
The delay occurs once the database in recovery has reached a consistent
- state, until the standby is promoted or triggered. After that the standby
+ state, until the standby is promoted or triggered. After that, the standby
will end recovery without further waiting.
</para>
<para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/indices.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/indices.sgml
index 3493f48..0127ae9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/indices.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/indices.sgml
@@ -1079,7 +1079,7 @@ SELECT x FROM tab WHERE x = 'key' AND z < 42;
scan. Even in the successful case, this approach trades visibility map
accesses for heap accesses; but since the visibility map is four orders
of magnitude smaller than the heap it describes, far less physical I/O is
- needed to access it. In most situations the visibility map remains
+ needed to access it. In most situations, the visibility map remains
cached in memory all the time.
</para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml
index 4493862..847e028 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml
@@ -2527,7 +2527,7 @@ xcodebuild -version -sdk macosx Path
</programlisting>
Note that building an extension using a different sysroot version than
was used to build the core server is not really recommended; in the
- worst case it could result in hard-to-debug ABI inconsistencies.
+ worst case, it could result in hard-to-debug ABI inconsistencies.
</para>
<para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table.sgml
index 0172fa3..10fa7d4 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table.sgml
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@ WITH ( MODULUS <replaceable class="parameter">numeric_literal</replaceable>, REM
This clause specifies optional storage parameters for a table or index;
see <xref linkend="sql-createtable-storage-parameters"
endterm="sql-createtable-storage-parameters-title"/> for more
- information. For backward-compatibility the <literal>WITH</literal>
+ information. For backward-compatibility, the <literal>WITH</literal>
clause for a table can also include <literal>OIDS=FALSE</literal> to
specify that rows of the new table should not contain OIDs (object
identifiers), <literal>OIDS=TRUE</literal> is not supported anymore.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml
index 679e8f5..ececc4a 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_table_as.sgml
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ CREATE [ [ GLOBAL | LOCAL ] { TEMPORARY | TEMP } | UNLOGGED ] TABLE [ IF NOT EXI
This clause specifies optional storage parameters for the new table;
see <xref linkend="sql-createtable-storage-parameters"
endterm="sql-createtable-storage-parameters-title"/> for more
- information. For backward-compatibility the <literal>WITH</literal>
+ information. For backward-compatibility, the <literal>WITH</literal>
clause for a table can also include <literal>OIDS=FALSE</literal> to
specify that rows of the new table should contain no OIDs (object
identifiers), <literal>OIDS=TRUE</literal> is not supported anymore.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgupgrade.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgupgrade.sgml
index c896882..7fee896 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgupgrade.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgupgrade.sgml
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ psql --username=postgres --file=script.sql postgres
<application>pg_upgrade</application> launches short-lived postmasters in
the old and new data directories. Temporary Unix socket files for
communication with these postmasters are, by default, made in the current
- working directory. In some situations the path name for the current
+ working directory. In some situations, the path name for the current
directory might be too long to be a valid socket name. In that case you
can use the <option>-s</option> option to put the socket files in some
directory with a shorter path name. For security, be sure that that
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ psql --username=postgres --file=script.sql postgres
</para>
<para>
- In <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> 12 and later small tables by
+ In <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> 12 and later, small tables by
default don't have a free space map, as a space optimization. If you are
upgrading a pre-12 cluster, the free space maps of small tables will
likewise not be transferred to the new cluster.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml
index 1b5d82e..2f86885 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml
@@ -1053,7 +1053,7 @@ testdb=>
These operations are not as efficient as the <acronym>SQL</acronym>
<command>COPY</command> command with a file or program data source or
destination, because all data must pass through the client/server
- connection. For large amounts of data the <acronym>SQL</acronym>
+ connection. For large amounts of data, the <acronym>SQL</acronym>
command might be preferable.
</para>
</tip>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml
index 79f5322..520bbae 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ less -x4
<para>
There are two required elements for every message: a severity level
(ranging from <literal>DEBUG</literal> to <literal>PANIC</literal>) and a primary
- message text. In addition there are optional elements, the most
+ message text. In addition, there are optional elements, the most
common of which is an error identifier code that follows the SQL spec's
SQLSTATE conventions.
<function>ereport</function> itself is just a shell function that exists
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ Hint: the addendum
<para>
Rationale: Messages are not necessarily displayed on terminal-type
- displays. In GUI displays or browsers these formatting instructions are
+ displays. In GUI displays or browsers, these formatting instructions are
at best ignored.
</para>
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