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From: Pavel Stehule <[email protected]>
To: Erik Rijkers <[email protected]>
Cc: Michael Paquier <[email protected]>
Cc: Zhihong Yu <[email protected]>
Cc: Amit Kapila <[email protected]>
Cc: DUVAL REMI <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL Hackers <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: proposal: schema variables - doc
Date: Mon, 22 Mar 2021 10:47:07 +0100
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Hi

st 17. 3. 2021 v 13:05 odesílatel Erik Rijkers <[email protected]> napsal:

>
> > On 2021.03.13. 07:01 Pavel Stehule <[email protected]> wrote:
> > Hi
> > fresh rebase
> > [schema-variables-20210313.patch.gz]
>
>
> Hi Pavel,
>
> I notice that the phrase 'schema variable' is not in the index at the end
> ('bookindex.html').  Not good.
>
> It is also not in the index at the front of the manual - also not good.
>
> Maybe these two (front and back index) can be added?
>

I inserted new indexterm "schema variable", and now this part of
bookindex.html looks like:

schema variablealtering, ALTER VARIABLEchanging, LETdefining, CREATE
VARIABLEdescription, Descriptionremoving, DROP VARIABLE



>
> If a user searches the pdf, the first occurrence he finds is at:
>
>   43.13.2.4. Global variables and constants
>   (in itself that occurrence/mention is all right, but is should not be
> the first find, I think)
>
> (I think there was in earlier versions of the patch an entry in the
> 'contents', i.e., at the front of the manual).  I think it would be good to
> have it in the front-index, pointing to either LET or CREATE VARIABLE, or
> maybe even to a small introductory paragraph somewhere else (again, I seem
> to remember that there was one in an earlier patch version).
>


I wrote new section to "advanced features" about schema variables


>
>
> Of the new commands that this patch brings, 'LET' is the most immediately
> illuminating for a user (even when a CREATE VARIABLE has to be done first.
> There is an entry 'LET' in the index (good), but it would be better if that
> with LET-entry too the phrase 'schema variable' occurred.  (I don't know if
> that's possible)
>
>
> Then, in the CREATE VARIABLE paragraphs it says
>    'Changing a schema variable is non-transactional by default.'
>
> I think that, unless there exists a mode where schema vars can be made
> transactional, 'by default' should be deleted (and there is no such
> 'transactional mode' for schema variables, is there?).  The 'Description'
> also has such a 'By default' which is better removed for the same reason.
>

fixed


>
> In the CREATE VARIABLE page the example is:
>
> CREATE VARIABLE var1 AS integer;
> SELECT var1;
>
> I suggest to make that
>
> CREATE VARIABLE var1 AS date;
> LET var1 = (select current_date);
> SELECT var1;
>
> So that the example immediately shows an application of functionality.
>

done

Thank you for the documentation review.

Updated patch attached

Regards

Pavel



>
> Thanks,
>
> Erik Rijkers
>
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> > Pavel
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