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On 01/11/2013 03:00 PM, Josh Berkus wrote:
>
> Jonathan,
>
>> The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page discussing the
>> sponsorship levels and selection process.  I reworded the sentences to more
>> clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are and how they are
>> selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.
>
> Thank you for taking this on!
>
> Unfortunately, I think that your new wording is just as muddy as the
> previous wording.  Can we use this instead?
>
> "Sponsorship levels are based on both duration and volume of code and
> non-code contributions to the project.  The list of project sponsors
> every one to two years by the Sponsorship Committee<link>.  If you find
> missing sponsors or inaccurate information on the sponsors list, please
> contact <mailto>"


You missed a word or two in there:

The list of project sponsors is reviewed approximately every years by 
the Sponsorship Committee<link>.




>
> ... this will also require us to have a mailto address for people to
> contact.
>


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