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From: Jonathan S. Katz <[email protected]>
To: PostgreSQL WWW <[email protected]>
Subject: Sponsorship Page Language
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2013 10:55:28 -0500
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Hello,

When looking at the sponsorship page (http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/) I noticed a few things regarding the language that I've attempted to clean up with this patch.

The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they are ordered randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top.

The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process.  I reworded the sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.

Best,

Jonathan


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  [application/octet-stream] 0001-Modified-text-on-sponsorship-page.patch (2.0K, 3-0001-Modified-text-on-sponsorship-page.patch)
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From 18e973a6aba65e0a33edd1b616b7fc8d9f8804a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jonathan S. Katz" <[email protected]>
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2013 10:42:10 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Modified text on sponsorship page

---
 templates/sponsors/sponsors.html |   20 ++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/sponsors/sponsors.html b/templates/sponsors/sponsors.html
index 88b5dfc..0cabce1 100644
--- a/templates/sponsors/sponsors.html
+++ b/templates/sponsors/sponsors.html
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <h1>Sponsors</h1>
 
 <p><span class="txtMediumGrey">The following is a categorized list of significant sponsors to PostgreSQL.
-Sponsors are listed in alphabetical order within each section, with just the location of the head office
+Sponsors are display in no particular order within each section, with just the location of the head office
 for each company shown.
 </span></p>
 
@@ -34,17 +34,13 @@ for each company shown.
 </div>
 
 <div class="tblBasic">
-<table border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tblBasicGrey">
-<tr class="lastrow">
-<th colspan="3">Sponsorship levels are meant to provide the general public and idea of how levels are determined.
-	They are not set in stone and all sponsorship recognition shall be determined on its own merits by the
-	<a href="http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Sponsoring">Sponsorship Committee</a> as determined by a simple majority vote.
-</th>
-
-</tr>
-
-</table>
-
+	<table border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tblBasicGrey">
+		<tr class="lastrow">
+			<th colspan="3">
+				Sponsorship levels are meant to demonstrate the overall contributions of various organizations to PostgreSQL.  All sponsorship recognition is determined by a majority vote from the <a href="http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Sponsoring">Sponsorship Committee</a> using following <a href="http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Sponsoring">these guidelines</a>.
+			</th>
+		</tr>
+	</table>
 </div>
 
 {%endblock%}
-- 
1.7.9.6 (Apple Git-31.1)

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