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From: Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2013 15:57:51 +0000
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Subject: Re: Sponsorship Page Language
To: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jonathan.katz@excoventures.com>
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On 11 January 2013 15:55, Jonathan S. Katz
<jonathan.katz@excoventures.com>wrote:

> Hello,
>
> When looking at the sponsorship page (
> http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/) I noticed a few things
> regarding the language that I've attempted to clean up with this patch.
>
> The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they are ordered
> randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top.
>
> The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page
> discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process.  I reworded the
> sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are
> and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.
>

s/Sponsors are display/Sponsors are displayed/

s/using following/following/ although perhaps "in accordance with"

-- 
Thom

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<div dir=3D"ltr">On 11 January 2013 15:55, Jonathan S. Katz <span dir=3D"lt=
r">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jonathan.katz@excoventures.com" target=3D"_blank">=
jonathan.katz@excoventures.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><div class=3D"gmail=
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<div>Hello,</div><div><br></div><div>When looking at the sponsorship page (=
<a href=3D"http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/" target=3D"_blank">htt=
p://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/</a>) I noticed a few things regardin=
g the language that I&#39;ve attempted to clean up with this patch.</div>

<div><br></div><div>The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they a=
re ordered randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top=
.</div><div><br></div><div>The second has to do with the language on the bo=
ttom of the page discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process. =
=A0I reworded the sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponso=
rship levels are and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guideli=
nes on the wiki.</div>

<div></div></div></blockquote></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br></div><d=
iv class=3D"gmail_extra" style>s/Sponsors are display/Sponsors are displaye=
d/</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra" style><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extr=
a" style>

s/using following/following/ although perhaps &quot;in accordance with&quot=
;</div><div><br></div>-- <br>Thom
</div></div>

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