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From: Jonathan S. Katz <[email protected]>
To: Justin Clift <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL Advocacy <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft
Date: Sun, 21 May 2023 13:02:01 -0400
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On 5/19/23 11:02 AM, Justin Clift wrote:

> The sentence after that starts:
> 
>    "This release also adds ..."
> 
> With the one following it starting with "This includes ...".  Together,
> they a bit unwieldy too.  Maybe something like this instead?

Thanks -- I broke this one up into two sentences.

>    "This release also adds several new security-oriented connection
>     parameters for clients, including ..."
> 
> ---
> 
> Would this:
> 
>    "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to specify that
>     PostgreSQL can use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
>     for that operating system."
> 
> Be better as?
> 
>    "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to instruct
>     PostgreSQL to use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
>     provided by the operating system."
> 
> ---

I took this suggestion, with modifications.

> Nothing else is jumping out at me.  It all seems pretty good. :)

Thanks!



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