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From: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Subject: Minor documentation fixes
Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2022 15:58:10 +0300
Message-ID: <0af43b49-1646-93d0-ccf1-bb3c635c8c6f@postgrespro.ru> (raw)

Hello everybody,

My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a 
few minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 
15 documentation. The attached patch fixes them.

Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the 
names of commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.

-- 
Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.com

Attachments:

  [text/x-patch] for_postgreSQL_15_doc.patch (3.2K, ../0af43b49-1646-93d0-ccf1-bb3c635c8c6f@postgrespro.ru/2-for_postgreSQL_15_doc.patch)
  download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 2fe902eed2..53b178da95 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -6757,11 +6757,11 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
          For example, if syncing the data directory takes 25 seconds and
          thereafter resetting unlogged relations takes 8 seconds, and if this
          setting has the default value of 10 seconds, then a messages will be
          logged for syncing the data directory after it has been in progress
          for 10 seconds and again after it has been in progress for 20 seconds,
-         but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged operations.
+         but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged relations.
         </para>
        </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
 
      </variablelist>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
index 9b752e26f2..9cc6dc0d9e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
@@ -1282,11 +1282,11 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Allow <link
         linkend="monitoring-stats-funcs-table"><function>pg_stat_reset_single_table_counters()</function></link>
         to reset the counters of relations shared across all databases
-        (B Sadhu, Prasad Patro)
+        (Sadhuprasad Patro)
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
 <!--
 Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
@@ -1793,11 +1793,11 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
 2021-11-02 [f3d4019da] Ensure consistent logical replication of datetime and fl
 -->
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Adjust subscriber server variables to match the publisher so
+        Adjust subscriber server variables to match the publisher so that
         datetime and float8 values are interpreted consistently (Japin Li)
        </para>
 
        <para>
         Some publishers might be relying on inconsistent behavior.
@@ -1918,11 +1918,11 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
 
      <listitem>
       <para>
        Allow <link linkend="sql-createdatabase"><command>CREATE
        DATABASE</command></link> to set the database <acronym>OID</acronym>
-       (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
+       (Shruthi Gowda, Antonin Houska)
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
 <!--
 Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
@@ -2446,11 +2446,11 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
         Add a pager option for the <command>\watch</command>
         command (Pavel Stehule, Thomas Munro)
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        This is only supported on Unix, and is controlled by the
+        This is only supported on Unix and is controlled by the
         <envar>PSQL_WATCH_PAGER</envar> environment variable.
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
 <!--
@@ -2926,11 +2926,11 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Make <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve tablespace
         and database OIDs, as well as relation relfilenode numbers
-        (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
+        (Shruthi Gowda, Antonin Houska)
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
 <!--
 Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>


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