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* Different wording in file_fdw document
@ 2012-09-19 11:06 Shigeru HANADA <[email protected]>
  2013-01-25 15:15 ` Re: Different wording in file_fdw document Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
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From: Shigeru HANADA @ 2012-09-19 11:06 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pgsql-docs

I found the term "foreign data server" in file_fdw document.  It doesn't
sound so strange, but "foreign server" or "server" (when context is
clear) are used for same meaning in other places, so users might be
confused by third form.

IMO it would be better to use qualified "foreign server" here.

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Shigeru HANADA

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
index 889aa77..4acb826 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ CREATE EXTENSION file_fdw;
 </programlisting>
 
   <para>
-   Then create a foreign data server:
+   Then create a foreign server:
 
 <programlisting>
 CREATE SERVER pglog FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER file_fdw;


Attachments:

  [text/plain] file_fdw_doc.patch (388B, 2-file_fdw_doc.patch)
  download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
index 889aa77..4acb826 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ CREATE EXTENSION file_fdw;
 </programlisting>
 
   <para>
-   Then create a foreign data server:
+   Then create a foreign server:
 
 <programlisting>
 CREATE SERVER pglog FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER file_fdw;


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* Re: Different wording in file_fdw document
  2012-09-19 11:06 Different wording in file_fdw document Shigeru HANADA <[email protected]>
@ 2013-01-25 15:15 ` Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread

From: Bruce Momjian @ 2013-01-25 15:15 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Shigeru HANADA <[email protected]>; +Cc: pgsql-docs

On Wed, Sep 19, 2012 at 08:06:28PM +0900, Shigeru HANADA wrote:
> I found the term "foreign data server" in file_fdw document.  It doesn't
> sound so strange, but "foreign server" or "server" (when context is
> clear) are used for same meaning in other places, so users might be
> confused by third form.
> 
> IMO it would be better to use qualified "foreign server" here.

Doc patch applied to git head and 9.2.  Thanks.

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