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From: Josh Kupershmidt <[email protected]>
To: pgsql-docs <[email protected]>
Subject: few awkward phrasing fixes
Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2013 19:02:39 -0700
Message-ID: <CAK3UJREq-wOgz3COvh2B2Qa1OVkifpq+vEP9UwWtQ3QdbSiBsQ@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
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Hi all,
Attached are two small patches to fix some awkward phrasing in
pg_basebackup.sgml and docguide.sgml.
Josh


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  [application/octet-stream] pg_basebackup_typofix.diff (1022B, 2-pg_basebackup_typofix.diff)
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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
new file mode 100644
index 2f89f2c..a251227
*** a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
*************** PostgreSQL documentation
*** 100,106 ****
       <para>
        All WAL records required for the backup must contain sufficient full-page writes,
        which requires you to enable <varname>full_page_writes</> on the master and
!       not to use the tool like <application>pg_compresslog</> as
        <varname>archive_command</> to remove full-page writes from WAL files.
       </para>
      </listitem>
--- 100,106 ----
       <para>
        All WAL records required for the backup must contain sufficient full-page writes,
        which requires you to enable <varname>full_page_writes</> on the master and
!       not to use a tool like <application>pg_compresslog</> as
        <varname>archive_command</> to remove full-page writes from WAL files.
       </para>
      </listitem>


  [application/octet-stream] docguide_phrasing.diff (886B, 3-docguide_phrasing.diff)
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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/docguide.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/docguide.sgml
new file mode 100644
index 09a4697..e807c29
*** a/doc/src/sgml/docguide.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/docguide.sgml
***************
*** 244,251 ****
  
     <para>
      It's possible that the ports do not update the main catalog file
!     in <filename>/usr/local/share/sgml/catalog.ports</filename> or order
!     isn't proper .  Be sure to have the following lines in beginning of file:
  <programlisting>
  CATALOG "openjade/catalog"
  CATALOG "iso8879/catalog"
--- 244,252 ----
  
     <para>
      It's possible that the ports do not update the main catalog file
!     in <filename>/usr/local/share/sgml/catalog.ports</filename> or that the 
!     order isn't proper.  Be sure to have the following lines in the beginning
!     of the file:
  <programlisting>
  CATALOG "openjade/catalog"
  CATALOG "iso8879/catalog"

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