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* Minor documentation fixes
@ 2022-09-27 12:58 Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
2022-10-03 08:43 ` Re: Minor documentation fixes Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
2022-10-05 20:00 ` Re: Minor documentation fixes Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
2022-10-05 20:19 ` Re: Minor documentation fixes Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
0 siblings, 3 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Elena Indrupskaya @ 2022-09-27 12:58 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Hello everybody,
My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a
few minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL
15 documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the
names of commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.
--
Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.com
Attachments:
[text/x-patch] for_postgreSQL_15_doc.patch (3.2K, ../../0af43b49-1646-93d0-ccf1-bb3c635c8c6f@postgrespro.ru/2-for_postgreSQL_15_doc.patch)
download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 2fe902eed2..53b178da95 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -6757,11 +6757,11 @@ local0.* /var/log/postgresql
For example, if syncing the data directory takes 25 seconds and
thereafter resetting unlogged relations takes 8 seconds, and if this
setting has the default value of 10 seconds, then a messages will be
logged for syncing the data directory after it has been in progress
for 10 seconds and again after it has been in progress for 20 seconds,
- but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged operations.
+ but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged relations.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
index 9b752e26f2..9cc6dc0d9e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-15.sgml
@@ -1282,11 +1282,11 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
<listitem>
<para>
Allow <link
linkend="monitoring-stats-funcs-table"><function>pg_stat_reset_single_table_counters()</function></link>
to reset the counters of relations shared across all databases
- (B Sadhu, Prasad Patro)
+ (Sadhuprasad Patro)
</para>
</listitem>
<!--
Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
@@ -1793,11 +1793,11 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
2021-11-02 [f3d4019da] Ensure consistent logical replication of datetime and fl
-->
<listitem>
<para>
- Adjust subscriber server variables to match the publisher so
+ Adjust subscriber server variables to match the publisher so that
datetime and float8 values are interpreted consistently (Japin Li)
</para>
<para>
Some publishers might be relying on inconsistent behavior.
@@ -1918,11 +1918,11 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
<listitem>
<para>
Allow <link linkend="sql-createdatabase"><command>CREATE
DATABASE</command></link> to set the database <acronym>OID</acronym>
- (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
+ (Shruthi Gowda, Antonin Houska)
</para>
</listitem>
<!--
Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
@@ -2446,11 +2446,11 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
Add a pager option for the <command>\watch</command>
command (Pavel Stehule, Thomas Munro)
</para>
<para>
- This is only supported on Unix, and is controlled by the
+ This is only supported on Unix and is controlled by the
<envar>PSQL_WATCH_PAGER</envar> environment variable.
</para>
</listitem>
<!--
@@ -2926,11 +2926,11 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
<listitem>
<para>
Make <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve tablespace
and database OIDs, as well as relation relfilenode numbers
- (Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
+ (Shruthi Gowda, Antonin Houska)
</para>
</listitem>
<!--
Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
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* Re: Minor documentation fixes
2022-09-27 12:58 Minor documentation fixes Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
@ 2022-10-03 08:43 ` Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
2 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Michael Paquier @ 2022-10-03 08:43 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>; +Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org, Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
>
> Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the names of
> commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.
This is mostly in the area of the release notes. Bruce?
--
Michael
Attachments:
[application/pgp-signature] signature.asc (832B, ../../Yzqgs2ruQbiOAeKn@paquier.xyz/2-signature.asc)
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* Re: Minor documentation fixes
2022-09-27 12:58 Minor documentation fixes Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
@ 2022-10-05 20:00 ` Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
2 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Bruce Momjian @ 2022-10-05 20:00 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>; +Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
>
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> index 2fe902eed2..53b178da95 100644
> --- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> +++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> @@ -6757,11 +6757,11 @@ local0.* /var/log/postgresql
> For example, if syncing the data directory takes 25 seconds and
> thereafter resetting unlogged relations takes 8 seconds, and if this
> setting has the default value of 10 seconds, then a messages will be
> logged for syncing the data directory after it has been in progress
> for 10 seconds and again after it has been in progress for 20 seconds,
> - but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged operations.
> + but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged relations.
> </para>
> </listitem>
> </varlistentry>
Sorry I am just getting to this item. You are correct this needs fixing
and I have applied this to master and PG 15. I will send a separate
email about the release note changes.
--
Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> https://momjian.us
EDB https://enterprisedb.com
Indecision is a decision. Inaction is an action. Mark Batterson
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* Re: Minor documentation fixes
2022-09-27 12:58 Minor documentation fixes Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
@ 2022-10-05 20:19 ` Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
2 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Bruce Momjian @ 2022-10-05 20:19 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>; +Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org, Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
>
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
>
> Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the names of
> commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.
Wow, you and Peter Eisentraut did better job of researching these two
author names than I did. I also applied the diff that removed the
comma, but the skipped the one that removed the "that" since I was told
not to use "that" when it isn't needed.
Thanks.
--
Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> https://momjian.us
EDB https://enterprisedb.com
Indecision is a decision. Inaction is an action. Mark Batterson
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