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To: Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
To: PostgreSQL-development <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: First draft of PG 17 release notes
Date: Tue, 14 May 2024 13:34:56 +0300
Message-ID: <[email protected]> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>
References: <[email protected]>
Hi everybody,
Being a technical writer, I attached a small patch that fixes minor
language stuff.
Thank you.
Elena Indrupskaya
Postgres Professional Company
Moscow, Russia
On 09.05.2024 07:03, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> I have committed the first draft of the PG 17 release notes; you can
> see the results here:
>
> https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-17.html
>
> It will be improved until the final release. The item count is 188,
> which is similar to recent releases:
>
> release-10: 189
> release-11: 170
> release-12: 180
> release-13: 178
> release-14: 220
> release-15: 184
> release-16: 206
> release-17: 188
>
> I welcome feedback. For some reason it was an easier job than usual.
>
Attachments:
[text/x-patch] release_17.patch (2.2K, ../[email protected]/2-release_17.patch)
download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
index 5a741ff16f..1ecf40fc73 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <[email protected]>
<listitem>
<para>
-Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end of in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
+Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
</para>
<para>
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <[email protected]>
<listitem>
<para>
-Allow a BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
+Allow BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -941,7 +941,7 @@ Allow the creation of WAL summarization files (Robert Haas, Nathan Bossart, Hube
</para>
<para>
-These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range, and is useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
+These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range and are useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
summarize_wal and wal_summarize_keep_time, and introspected with pg_available_wal_summaries(), pg_wal_summary_contents(), and pg_get_wal_summarizer_state().
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1113,7 +1113,7 @@ Allow the application of logical replication changes to use hash indexes on the
</para>
<para>
-Previously only btree indexes could be use for this purpose.
+Previously only btree indexes could be used for this purpose.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2185,7 +2185,7 @@ Allow pg_basebackup and pg_receivewal to use dbname in their connection specific
</para>
<para>
-This is useful for connection poolers who are sensitive to the database name.
+This is useful for connection poolers that are sensitive to the database name.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2346,7 +2346,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <[email protected]>
<listitem>
<para>
-Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
+Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
</para>
<para>
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