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From: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
To: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
Cc: Joshua D. Drake <jd@commandprompt.com>
Cc: Stephen Frost <sfrost@snowman.net>
Cc: pgsql-docs <pgsql-docs@postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: readability changes to postgres.sgml
Date: Tue, 20 Aug 2019 07:36:15 +0200
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On 2019-08-20 07:05, Michael Paquier wrote:
> On Mon, Aug 19, 2019 at 04:00:13PM -0700, Joshua D. Drake wrote:
>> New version attached with spelling errors fixed.
> 
> I have gone through this patch, and I have a hard time understanding
> why these are improvements over the existing wording.  In what does
> this make things better?

It's pretty simple, it improves readability.  It does so mainly by 
removing unnecessary text.

+1






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