From: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
To: Stephen Frost <sfrost@snowman.net>
Cc: Joshua D. Drake <jd@commandprompt.com>
Cc: pgsql-docs <pgsql-docs@postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: readability changes to postgres.sgml
Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2019 07:22:39 +0200
Message-ID: <996bcfe233f558276f4f5962673ba164@xs4all.nl> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20190816002623.GS16436@tamriel.snowman.net>
References: <5ac2c96d-37a6-18aa-08c4-327a6fbff24b@commandprompt.com>
<20190816002623.GS16436@tamriel.snowman.net>
On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> * Joshua D. Drake (jd@commandprompt.com) wrote:
>> attached
> they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is
For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or not.
However, there is one typo:
+ read independently. There are many extrernal programming
extrernal -> external
(and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another
little improvement)
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