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Subject: [very minor] Documentation suggestion
Date: Fri, 21 Oct 2022 02:19:12 +0000
Message-ID: <166631875298.630.2861049399528658047@wrigleys.postgresql.org> (raw)
The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html
Description:
Very minor suggestion. Earlier on this page, commands are referred to that
can cause "a deadlock". Later on the page, it says "cause deadlock".
https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html/
"Note that these commands that can cause deadlock"
I think that may also be grammatically correct, however I thought "a
deadlock" (adding the "a") sounded smoother to me when reading. Suggestion
below (adds "a" before "deadlock").
"Note that these commands that can cause a deadlock"
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