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* Proofreading the documentation
@ 2009-04-24 20:31 Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
  2009-04-27 16:45 ` Re: Proofreading the documentation Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
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From: Bruce Momjian @ 2009-04-24 20:31 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pgsql-docs

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I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation:

	http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009

I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and
have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line
changes):

	ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs

I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two
changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements,
not problems in accuracy or even clarity.

I am only 20% through the docs.  I will take a break now and work on
pg_migrator.

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  Bruce Momjian  <[email protected]>        http://momjian.us
  EnterpriseDB                             http://enterprisedb.com

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* Re: Proofreading the documentation
  2009-04-24 20:31 Proofreading the documentation Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
@ 2009-04-27 16:45 ` Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
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From: Bruce Momjian @ 2009-04-27 16:45 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>; +Cc: pgsql-docs

Bruce Momjian wrote:
> [ resent without large attachment]
> 
> I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation:
> 
> 	http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009
> 
> I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and
> have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line
> changes):
> 
> 	ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs
> 
> I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two
> changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements,
> not problems in accuracy or even clarity.
> 
> I am only 20% through the docs.  I will take a break now and work on
> pg_migrator.
> 

Applied.

-- 
  Bruce Momjian  <[email protected]>        http://momjian.us
  EnterpriseDB                             http://enterprisedb.com

  + If your life is a hard drive, Christ can be your backup. +




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