From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Subject: Re: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
Date: Tue, 20 Jul 2021 19:37:13 -0400
Message-ID: <20210720233713.GC27025@momjian.us> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru>
References: <38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru>
On Tue, Jul 20, 2021 at 03:58:00PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everyone,
>
> I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release
> Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them
> is attached.
> One of the replacements changes
>
> "which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
> "to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
>
> because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a
> comma before "which").
Thanks. I added a comma as you suggested, and committed.
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