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* Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
@ 2021-07-20 12:58 Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
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From: Elena Indrupskaya @ 2021-07-20 12:58 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Hello everyone,
I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14
Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A
patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes
"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or
just add a comma before "which").
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Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext.
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Attachments:
[text/x-patch] rn_14_language.patch (1.7K, ../../38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru/3-rn_14_language.patch)
download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
index ecd074361c6..4f0437f87d9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
<para>
Reduce the default value of <xref
- linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflects current
+ linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflect current
hardware capabilities (Peter Geoghegan)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
<para>
Add system view <link
linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-wal-view"><structname>pg_stat_wal</structname></link>
- which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
+ to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
</para>
<para>
- Previously these functions could only be executed by super-users,
+ Previously these functions could only be executed by superusers,
and this is still the default.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2599,7 +2599,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
</para>
<para>
- Floating point data types already supported these.
+ Floating-point data types already supported these.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2610,7 +2610,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Improve the accuracy of floating point computations involving
+ Improve the accuracy of floating-point computations involving
infinity (Tom Lane)
</para>
</listitem>
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* Re: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
@ 2021-07-20 23:37 Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
parent: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>
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From: Bruce Momjian @ 2021-07-20 23:37 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>; +Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
On Tue, Jul 20, 2021 at 03:58:00PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everyone,
>
> I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release
> Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them
> is attached.
> One of the replacements changes
>
> "which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
> "to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
>
> because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a
> comma before "which").
Thanks. I added a comma as you suggested, and committed.
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Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> https://momjian.us
EDB https://enterprisedb.com
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