From: Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@postgrespro.ru>
To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org
Subject: some grammar fixes for docs
Date: Thu, 16 May 2019 17:11:37 +0300
Message-ID: <92961161-9b49-e42f-0a72-d5d47e0ed4de@postgrespro.ru> (raw)
Hi,
I have noticed imperfect grammar in a couple of sgml files, please
consider a small patch (attached).
--
Liudmila Mantrova
Technical writer at Postgres Professional: http://www.postgrespro.com
The Russian Postgres Company
Attachments:
[text/x-patch] grammar-fixes.patch (3.1K, ../92961161-9b49-e42f-0a72-d5d47e0ed4de@postgrespro.ru/2-grammar-fixes.patch)
download | inline diff:diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgmlindex ee2501b..ef22a48 100644--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ pgbench <optional> <replaceable>options</replaceable> </optional> <replaceable>d
<term><option>--latency-limit=</option><replaceable>limit</replaceable></term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Transaction which last more than <replaceable>limit</replaceable> milliseconds+ Transactions that last more than <replaceable>limit</replaceable> milliseconds
are counted and reported separately, as <firstterm>late</firstterm>.
</para>
<para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgmlindex d43ef13..7cf9d0e 100644--- a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml+++ b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
<para>
Of the two operator classes for type <type>point</type>,
<literal>quad_point_ops</literal> is the default. <literal>kd_point_ops</literal>
- supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure which+ supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure that
may offer better performance in some applications.
</para>
<para>
@@ -292,9 +292,9 @@
<function>leaf_consistent</function> additionally returns a <type>boolean</type> result.
The methods must not modify any fields of their input structs. In all
cases, the output struct is initialized to zeroes before calling the
- user-defined method. Optional sixth method <function>compress</function>- accepts datum to be indexed as the only argument and returns value suitable- for physical storage in leaf tuple.+ user-defined method. The optional sixth method <function>compress</function>+ accepts datum to be indexed as the only argument and returns a value suitable+ for physical storage in a leaf tuple.
</para>
<para>
@@ -447,9 +447,9 @@ typedef struct spgChooseOut
type that was to be inserted into the index.
<structfield>leafDatum</structfield> is a value of
<structname>spgConfigOut</structname>.<structfield>leafType</structfield>
- type which is initially an result of method+ type, which is initially a result of method
<function>compress</function> applied to <structfield>datum</structfield>
- when method <function>compress</function> is provided, or same value as+ when method <function>compress</function> is provided, or the same value as
<structfield>datum</structfield> otherwise.
<structfield>leafDatum</structfield> can change at lower levels of the tree
if the <function>choose</function> or <function>picksplit</function>
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ typedef struct spgLeafConsistentOut
Converts the data item into a format suitable for physical storage in
a leaf tuple of index page. It accepts
<structname>spgConfigIn</structname>.<structfield>attType</structfield>
- value and return+ value and returns
<structname>spgConfigOut</structname>.<structfield>leafType</structfield>
value. Output value should not be toasted.
</para>
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