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From: Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>
To: Amit Kapila <amit.kapila16@gmail.com>
Cc: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
Cc: pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org
Subject: Re: typos in comments and user docs
Date: Thu, 6 Feb 2020 07:56:40 -0600
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On Thu, Feb 06, 2020 at 04:43:18PM +0530, Amit Kapila wrote:
> On Thu, Feb 6, 2020 at 10:45 AM Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz> wrote:
> >
> > On Thu, Feb 06, 2020 at 08:47:14AM +0530, Amit Kapila wrote:
> > > Your changes look fine to me on the first read.  I will push this to
> > > HEAD unless there are any objections.   If we want them in
> > > back-branches, we might want to probably segregate the changes based
> > > on the branch until those apply.
> >
> > +1.  It would be nice to back-patch the user-visible changes in the
> > docs.
> >
> 
> Fair enough, Justin, is it possible for you to segregate the changes
> that can be backpatched?

Looks like the whole patch can be applied to master and v12 [0].

My original thread from last year was about docs added in v12, so bloom.sgml is
the only user-facing doc which can be backpatched.  README.parallel and
bufmgr.c changes could be backpatched but I agree it's not necessary.

Note, the bloom typo seems to complete a change that was started here:

|commit 31ff51adc855e3ffe8e3c20e479b8d1a4508feb8
|Author: Alexander Korotkov <akorotkov@postgresql.org>
|Date:   Mon Oct 22 00:23:26 2018 +0300
|
|    Fix some grammar errors in bloom.sgml
|    
|    Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAEepm%3D3sijpGr8tXdyz-7EJJZfhQHABPKEQ29gpnb7-XSy%2B%3D5A%40mail.gmail.com
|    Reported-by: Thomas Munro
|    Backpatch-through: 9.6

Justin

[0] modulo a fix for a typo which I introduced in another patch in this branch,
which shouldn't have been in this patch; fixed in the attached.

Attachments: download all (2 files, .tar.gz)

0001-spelling-and-typos.patch (text/x-diff, 5.5K) download From a1780229e024e2e4b9a0549bcd516bb80b2d5a8d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Justin Pryzby <pryzbyj@telsasoft.com> Date: Thu, 9 May 2019 21:13:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] spelling and typos --- doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml | 2 +- doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_table.sgml | 2 +- doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml | 4 ++-- src/backend/access/transam/README.parallel | 2 +- src/backend/storage/buffer/bufmgr.c | 2 +- src/backend/storage/sync/sync.c | 2 +- src/include/access/tableam.h | 2 +- 7 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml index 6eeadde..c341b65 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ <para> Number of bits generated for each index column. Each parameter's name refers to the number of the index column that it controls. The default - is <literal>2</literal> bits and maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for + is <literal>2</literal> bits and the maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for index columns not actually used are ignored. </para> </listitem> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_table.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_table.sgml index 5de3676..a22770c 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_table.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_table.sgml @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ WITH ( MODULUS <replaceable class="parameter">numeric_literal</replaceable>, REM <para> <literal>SET NOT NULL</literal> may only be applied to a column - providing none of the records in the table contain a + provided none of the records in the table contain a <literal>NULL</literal> value for the column. Ordinarily this is checked during the <literal>ALTER TABLE</literal> by scanning the entire table; however, if a valid <literal>CHECK</literal> constraint is diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml index 5831ec4..b5d28e7 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/sources.sgml @@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ Hint: the addendum <para> There are functions in the backend that will double-quote their own output - at need (for example, <function>format_type_be()</function>). Do not put + as needed (for example, <function>format_type_be()</function>). Do not put additional quotes around the output of such functions. </para> @@ -880,7 +880,7 @@ BETTER: unrecognized node type: 42 practices. </para> <para> - Features from later revision of the C standard or compiler specific + Features from later revisions of the C standard or compiler specific features can be used, if a fallback is provided. </para> <para> diff --git a/src/backend/access/transam/README.parallel b/src/backend/access/transam/README.parallel index 85e5840..99c588d 100644 --- a/src/backend/access/transam/README.parallel +++ b/src/backend/access/transam/README.parallel @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ differently because of them. Right now, we don't even allow that. At the end of a parallel operation, which can happen either because it completed successfully or because it was interrupted by an error, parallel workers associated with that operation exit. In the error case, transaction -abort processing in the parallel leader kills of any remaining workers, and +abort processing in the parallel leader kills off any remaining workers, and the parallel leader then waits for them to die. In the case of a successful parallel operation, the parallel leader does not send any signals, but must wait for workers to complete and exit of their own volition. In either diff --git a/src/backend/storage/buffer/bufmgr.c b/src/backend/storage/buffer/bufmgr.c index aba3960..5880054 100644 --- a/src/backend/storage/buffer/bufmgr.c +++ b/src/backend/storage/buffer/bufmgr.c @@ -4291,7 +4291,7 @@ ts_ckpt_progress_comparator(Datum a, Datum b, void *arg) * * *max_pending is a pointer instead of an immediate value, so the coalesce * limits can easily changed by the GUC mechanism, and so calling code does - * not have to check the current configuration. A value is 0 means that no + * not have to check the current configuration. A value of 0 means that no * writeback control will be performed. */ void diff --git a/src/backend/storage/sync/sync.c b/src/backend/storage/sync/sync.c index 9cb7c65..8282a47 100644 --- a/src/backend/storage/sync/sync.c +++ b/src/backend/storage/sync/sync.c @@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ SyncPostCheckpoint(void) /* * As in ProcessSyncRequests, we don't want to stop absorbing fsync - * requests for along time when there are many deletions to be done. + * requests for a long time when there are many deletions to be done. * We can safely call AbsorbSyncRequests() at this point in the loop * (note it might try to delete list entries). */ diff --git a/src/include/access/tableam.h b/src/include/access/tableam.h index 696451f..ba9f7b8 100644 --- a/src/include/access/tableam.h +++ b/src/include/access/tableam.h @@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@ table_tuple_complete_speculative(Relation rel, TupleTableSlot *slot, * operation. That's often faster than calling table_insert() in a loop, * because e.g. the AM can reduce WAL logging and page locking overhead. * - * Except for taking `nslots` tuples as input, as an array of TupleTableSlots + * Except for taking `nslots` tuples as input, and an array of TupleTableSlots * in `slots`, the parameters for table_multi_insert() are the same as for * table_tuple_insert(). * -- 2.7.4
0001-bloom-typo-for-backpatch-to-9.6.patch (text/x-diff, 906B) download From 51c7956b238357080bc3204a534faaf4017fa8df Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Justin Pryzby <pryzbyj@telsasoft.com> Date: Thu, 9 May 2019 21:13:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] bloom typo for backpatch to 9.6 --- doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml index 6eeadde..c341b65 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/bloom.sgml @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ <para> Number of bits generated for each index column. Each parameter's name refers to the number of the index column that it controls. The default - is <literal>2</literal> bits and maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for + is <literal>2</literal> bits and the maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for index columns not actually used are ignored. </para> </listitem> -- 2.7.4

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