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To: Jonathan S. Katz <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL WWW <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Sponsorship Page Language
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2013 15:57:51 +0000
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On 11 January 2013 15:55, Jonathan S. Katz
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> Hello,
>
> When looking at the sponsorship page (
> http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/) I noticed a few things
> regarding the language that I've attempted to clean up with this patch.
>
> The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they are ordered
> randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top.
>
> The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page
> discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process. I reworded the
> sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are
> and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.
>
s/Sponsors are display/Sponsors are displayed/
s/using following/following/ although perhaps "in accordance with"
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Thom
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