From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: David G. Johnston <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>
Cc: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
Cc: Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa@gmail.com>
Cc: Magnus Hagander <magnus@hagander.net>
Cc: Pg Docs <pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: typo in sentence
Date: Fri, 21 Aug 2020 20:24:52 -0400
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On Tue, Aug 4, 2020 at 06:03:26PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote:
> On Tuesday, August 4, 2020, Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:
>
> Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa@gmail.com> writes:
> > There is only a single sentence starting with 'if' and not two. The
> phrase
> > 'it is therefore ..' is preceded by a comma and not a period. Hence,
> > there's a single sentence and not two as you are referring to.
>
> I concur with Magnus that the "therefore" refers to the sentences
> preceding this one. While we could just drop it as you suggest,
> maybe better is to rearrange:
>
> Therefore, if one PostgreSQL server instance is to house projects or
> users that should be separate and for the most part unaware of each
> other, it is recommended to put them into separate databases.
>
>
>
> I put forth a minor reworking of this page a little while back.
>
> https://commitfest.postgresql.org/29/2647/
>
> https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/
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Great. I made a few slight adjustments and applied it back through 9.5.
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Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> https://momjian.us
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